Kims Over Weight

kim is over weight

her parent’s where never home

she just sat in her room day and night

never went out on dates

food was her only friend  her mom and dad

where always busy working and social life

her parents tryed everything sports swimimg

etc but kim sat and played video games day and night

Her self-esteen was running low at school everyone

joked and laughed passing notes saying get off the cough

she just home and ate more cake her parents gave up

and now just enable her even more she prayed and asked

if life would always be this hard

until then cake is kims only friend




I love my guitar, poetry, reading, writing, living life on the edge, Don't worry their no strangers here just strange people, Be sure to let me know you stop bye and let your hair down. Grab some coffee and hope you enjoy.
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4 Responses to Kims Over Weight

  1. Care Bear says:

    awww.. 😦 this poem is sad 😦 I feel bad for this girl I just wanna give her a hug. will u check out some of my poems plz. link is:

  2. kikischeuer says:

    good expression of the sadness of how not only does society and her parents all seam to fail her but Kim fails herself.

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